Hi! This week I'm posting on Sneak Peek Sunday! http://sneak-peek-sunday.blogspot.com/ These are the first six paragraphs of my WIP. Hope you enjoy them. Also, stay in touch because next week I'll be back to Blaize's tale and you don't want to miss that! Cheers : )
“On or off?”
Gossamer Triggs fisted
her fingers deeper into the bag she had crossed over her shoulder and shot the
driver a desperate look. Deep within the cowl hood of her red cloak her cheeks
burned with panic. She mumbled and dug faster. She knew the coins were in there
…somewhere. She’d gone to the market herself just this morning. She’d sold the
Mouse’s sneakers, risked selling a few more of the herbal amulets she’d made-
they had to eat, didn’t they? Only, she’d been so careful to leave enough to
make this trip but, now…it was just gone. Like the Mouse was just gone and home
was just gone and this city…
“Look,” the driver’s
voice, scratchy and raw liked he’d smoked too many cigarettes and accompanied
this time by sarcastic hand gestures grated out impatiently, “In or out?” His
snarky expression made it obvious that he didn’t think she was smart enough to
understand what he meant by “on or off.”
If she hadn’t have had
to run for the bus. If she had just taken the time to knot the coins in one of
the little bags she had stitched up to hold her herbs. If she hadn’t been so
worried about wrapping the bottle full of water she intended to trade for
information. But no, there hadn’t been time, it had to be this bus, she
couldn’t have waited any longer or it would have been too late. The dark fell
so quickly.
She knew better than to
do it but couldn’t stop herself from casting a panicked look behind her. The
longer the delay, the better the odds that a WLP guard would wander up- curious
in that shovey shovey way they all had- about what the holdup was. In the end it
was always the little things that gave you away, got you caught.
365 times six, that’s
how many days she’d been living in fear and-what was today? Living…re-living the
horror of being left in the dark, of being so cold- no way for the sun to ever
touch you. Of being so hungry in the dark, so alone, desperate to hear the
sound of another voice…but not his voice…never his voice.
Wow. I feel her fear. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by Melissa. This is still a work in progress-beginnings are hard for me and I rewrite them a lot! But fear is what I'm after so thanks for the feedback:)
ReplyDeleteHi, +Judith Post. Enjoyed your blog this week and thank you for mentioning me.
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